Monday, November 9, 2009

new intro

hi everyone,

I tried writing an intro (Damien mentions this) using some of Ian's original call plus my own attempt to deal with the content. It's underlined to indicate new text in the google doc. The last paragraph of this intro could perhaps be moved to the end to function as a conclusion (with tense changes).

I tried to work with Jean's headings but I gave up on that. Just couldn't make them work for equal amounts of text.

I also deleted the section on blogging (in red) to try to lower the word count. Ian has another paper in which these comments on blogging can appear.

best, Rachel

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